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Easy Prey by Evil-DeC0Y Easy Prey by Evil-DeC0Y
Yay, I'm back to making comics again!

I'm so happy I got this out before October, otherwise I wouldn't have posted any new pictures during the month of September, and I've only missed one month since I've started posting things, I didn't want to make it two.

I was going to make it a speechless comic (would've been my first one), but I think adding dialogue gives it more depth.

This comic is much longer than I would've like it to have been, but I already took a lot of things out at the storyboard phase, and I didn't want to take anymore out.

I'm deeply and madly in love with this comic right now, I'm so happy with the way it turned out.

I've been watching a lot of 'Attack on Titan' lately, and I wanted my lighting, and shading to stand out in a similar way.

I've gotten a lot of comments about Fluttershy not flying away, there are several reasons why I didn't have her fly away, the main one is that Fluttershy isn't a great flyer and I assume dragons are.
I tried to convey the uselessness of her flying away by having the dragon's wings being outstretched while her's were as well.


Edit: Fixed an embarrassing grammatical error.

Don't forget to check out the awesome dubbed version of this comic done by MareBrony: www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0ecgZ…
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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magicİ and it Characters both belong to Hasbroİ.
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That's the first time I do a critique... But not the last one I hope! :D


In the beginning, I thought that this comic would be a beginning of a story.
Then we see that dragon, the 2nd fear of Fluttershy
After, she's next of that cliff. At that point, I was like : "GO ON FLUTTERSHY! JUST FLY AWAY!!!" After second thought, I remembered of her first fear...

I admire the emotions you put in her face at that moment while the moon is shining behind the dragon, epic! And that plus the fog, the effects of speed and lights ; It was just... Wonderful!!! But, I din't really like the Dragon's breath though... (= 4,5 stars or the technique)

At that point, Fluttershy gave up, the tears made me feel really sad. Then, the hero comes to save the day! :D (what an impact in my feelings! =P)

And what can I say about the Dragonic transformation or Discord's awesome physics changes with his hand. It's one of the first time I see a kindly heart-feeling Discord, so here's 4,5 stars in originality!

The last three lasts pics made me be on the verge of tears (Impact is perfect)
I was in :iconblushplz: style!!!
:aww:~:heart:

We've got a dramatic vision at the beginning (it was an "in medias res" beginning, no? Why not? :D), then we've got that big freaking dragon, and then Discord.
In my vision, I saw Discord a little bit as Rainbow Dash (loyalty stuffs) then, as a very good friend of Fluttershy. (Fluttershy is Discord's best friend too! :P)

In a nutshell, that comic was... no, "is" as epic as it's heart-feeling and adorable!
:heart::heart::heart::aww::heart::heart::heart:
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72 out of 78 deviants thought this was fair.

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Bear with me; this is my first critique, so I'm trying to give a shot at it... u_u

The art is amazing and seems very show accurate, but for some reason, the shading with the light seems a little too bold, though that's just me.

The originality is also a little bit off. In all honesty, it is a little cliche for a character the be chased and end up running to a cliff, though I do see where you were getting to towards the end.

As for impact (and I am going to say this as seriously as I possibly can), I am unable to hold on to any of these feels. As I said before, I see where you were going with the ending and you pulled it off AMAZINGLY!

There's not much else I can say on it now except that you did an AMAZING job! :D
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Snowdog-zic Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Good comic. Don't mess with the friend of the Master of Chaos
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fost0385 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit!!!!!!!Discord (yes) plz + Fluttershy dance =Heart - Free 
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:iconaotearoa-geek13:
aotearoa-geek13 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
squee!!! Fluttershy squee Twilight (Squee) Plz 
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:iconpixelblujay:
PixelBlujay Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
FLUTTERCORD
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:iconicytigerjewel:
IcyTigerjewel Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Student Photographer
Is Fluttershay in love with him?
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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner May 5, 2015
idk but i would ship it if it hadent been done
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:iconicytigerjewel:
IcyTigerjewel Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Student Photographer
Ok :)
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:iconrosemp3:
RoseMP3 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Student Artist
<3
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:iconxsophififrosex:
xSophififRosex Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
I SHIP IT!
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
very nice.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3
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rollingthunder75 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Damn, just damn.
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Calypso399 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP SHIP
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DracoDei Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Regarding your edit: Fluttershy's wings lock up when she is afraid. Simple as that.
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:iconmanwiththemetalarm:
ManWithTheMetalArm Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
Having a chaos god as a friend does have its perks :D
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:iconcynderdragoness101:
cynderdragoness101 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So sweet. Please do more with Discord and Fluttershy!
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:iconbookworm39:
Bookworm39 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! Though I think I just felt my heart burst..
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:iconskyalar:
SKYALAR Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
Sooo Cuteeee!
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:iconhindenburg19890:
Hindenburg19890 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
awwww DA FEEELZS!
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:iconladyblackbird13:
ladyblackbird13 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!(100x) :love:
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:iconmalefor007:
malefor007 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
Can I write a fanfic based on this? I want your permission first before I do anything.
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:iconevil-dec0y:
Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure :D
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:iconmalefor007:
malefor007 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
Thanks, I'll be sure to give you credit when I am done with it.  And I will send you a link from Fanfiction.net when it is done.
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:iconmalefor007:
malefor007 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
well it is done: www.fanfiction.net/s/10977349/…

There is the link to the story based on this fan-comic.  Hope you like it.

P.S. I did give you credit for it
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Monkeyrofl901 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
I'm never gonna get my heart back at this rate.
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:iconbluefoxycat:
bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kawaii...
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:iconnikuchanprime:
nikuchanprime Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
Aww...hugs are nice.
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:iconanicreate1996:
anicreate1996 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
That was awesomely cute
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:iconpersona22:
Persona22 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
Never fear Captain Goodguy is here!
www.deviantart.com/art/Sir-Dis…
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:iconponylover115:
ponylover115 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Student Artist
that is so fricking cute fluttershyRequest: Blink Icon Roseluck Aunty Clap 
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JezzaRat Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
that is so adorably aww ^_^
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:iconinginuyasha:
inginuyasha Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Amazing job ^_^
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:iconstardusk4:
stardusk4 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
aww.. <3
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:iconthegoldenstefan:
TheGoldenStefan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Being poked in the eye with a claw at high speeds?
My eyes hurt just thinking about it.
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:iconsonicgirl1997:
sonicgirl1997 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWW Discord that was very heroic of you :D
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:iconkiinastar:
kiinastar Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Awww, that's a nice comic.
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:iconbellmo15:
bellmo15 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
I still don't trust Discord around Fluttershy
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:iconachickencupcake:
AChickenCupcake Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is the best.
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:iconstar3catcher:
star3catcher Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
Awwwwww!~
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:iconevabronyloveart:
EvaBronyLoveArt Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconhnnnngplz:
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:iconpowerpuffgirl111:
powerpuffgirl111 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Another reason to love Discord.
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:icondeppressedunicorn:
DeppressedUnicorn Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Sooooo cute!!!!!la in love 
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bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Edited Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
EDIT: Ahem, just read the description.
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:iconpixelartliz:
PixelArtLiz Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!
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:icongingerquill:
Gingerquill Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Super awwwww :3
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:iconsorrowscoldfrost:
Sorrowscoldfrost Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
*squees* Ahhh, so cute!!!!! I love this so much!
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:icongebos97531:
gebos97531 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
flutterhug! :3
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:iconsora200:
Sora200 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Discord, you are awesome! :D
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:iconalisatheraptor13:
AlisatheRaptor13 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Squeee!
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EliratheDinosaur Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thIS IS BY FAR THE BEST COMIC IN EXISTENCE.
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