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I've Got A Bone To Picnic by Evil-DeC0Y I've Got A Bone To Picnic by Evil-DeC0Y
Yay it's finally done, my first full comic (intentionally) done in my own style.
It went through many different rewrites. I had versions where the fighting was more vicious towards eachother, but I felt that it didn't suit it.

They're all wrong, Princess Luna is the best foalsitter (proof)--> [link]

I felt like this comic took way too long, I really need to up my production speed :/

I feel silly that I actually have to add this to the description, but my experience with some of my past comics have led me to realize that people take these comics way to seriously. Please don't actually take this fight seriously, don't get mad at any characters, get depressed,or get mad at me for this fight. Yes I'm aware that they are acting slightly out of character, it was done for the purpose of humor.

Also in the case that anyone is wondering what a "cotton headed ninny muggins" is, it's just a random reference to the movie "ELF", I figured it would make sense for Pinkie to say something random like that. It was only after typing it out that I realized "You know, written down this looks like it could be a racial slur...", which makes it all the more funny :XD:.
Proof that it's not a racial slur ---> [link]

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:iconkcjudy:
This is is a hilarious comic that shows that friends still have fights once in a while. The picnic scene means alot to me because Twilight starts singing her BBBFF song, a song that go around my house A lot in my house now. I'm glad that you made Twilight Sparkle a alicorn because really, when everyone makes her a alicorn in their fan art, there's always a sadness to it. I'm glad you took to the next level. The only problem is I wish there was more!!!! Thank you for making this and please please please keep up the good work!

-Kcjudy
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This is my first critique, so here goes...
First, good idea for the background: ponies at a picnic enjoying fruit and chattering. Personally, I didn't think they were out of character. I particularly liked Fluttershy's role in this one: trying to switch the subject first, then standing up and having her friends apologize to each other, then making a twist by actually commenting the subject that lead to the fight. And finally, using her famous stare. Well played, Fluttershy.
The comic is pretty funny and clever, starting with the pun in the title and continuing to the story itself. It's also nice to see an artist having his/her original style. Especially if it has its charm, and this one definitely has.
Twilight as an alicorn is a nice touch, and shows that the artist is keeping up with the show, though I wouldn't mind at all if she was depicted without her wings. It's good either way.
All in all, pretty good job and I hope to see more comics like this from this artist. Nice!
(Hope it was all right for the first time...)
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izzyo816 Apr 13, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
lawl i get it cuz twilight was a foal and pinkie and fluttershy have been foalsitters, nice!!!
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DragonTamer360 Apr 7, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
lol tat is so fluttershy!
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:iconaho4464:
Hmmm Mabye Fluttershy would be best Foalsitter.......AND BEST ABUSER OF THE STARE!!!!
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:iconultimateguardian7777:
Pinkies words of wisdom on the last panel
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:iconpaswdgfan:
thats cold girls

GROUNDED
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:iconglitterqueen:
Ha Ha Fluttershy is best foal sitter!
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ThePonyOfOne Feb 5, 2014
i think you forgot stares dont work on ponies
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:iconkingbowser26:
kingbowser26 Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Fluttershy I love you so much!!
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:iconpersona22:
This is hilarious! I love it!
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d3skinner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Fluttershy takes care of countless animals, and she was able to handle the CMC.
But the title of "best foalsitter" is really just a matter of opinion. :D
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