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Tooth Fairy by Evil-DeC0Y Tooth Fairy by Evil-DeC0Y
So this was a conversation that really happened between my mom(Granny Smith), my nephew(Apple Bloom), and myself(Applejack).

This here is the smallest comic I have made thus far, it beats out the previously smallest ones by four panels (unless you include my tumblr comics, in which case one of them is only one panel long).

I tried a slightly different style on this one, it almost the same as the 'Princess Pony Perks', and 'I've Got a Bone to Picnic' style, just with a much more drastic shading, and a simple cartoonish background.

P.S. I cannot believe it has been almost two months since I last made a comic... I've got to work on that. Thankfully this one didn't take but three days to make.

Edit: I nixed the darker shading for a normal style of shading.
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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magicİ and it Characters both belong to Hasbroİ.
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:iconrdmbox:
You have definitely improved the style since Princes Pony Perks. The shading adds a real depth to the image, though some people may prefer the flatter style, as in Bone to Picnic.

One slight problem with the style which has only appeared now (Applebloom's fault), is that because of the size of a filly's eye, the lack of a pupil is very noticeable. I am not a very good artist myself, but I might suggest making the iris a bit smaller and moving the white spots slightly towards the middle.

The 'set dressing' is great; I remember I said one of the previous pieces felt a bit cluttered in the background, but the background here is perfect. The pie and rolling pin describe the setting wonderfully, though I do wonder what Applejack and Granny were doing before Applebloom walked in. It seems as if they were simply staring expectantly at the pie.

The story and speech is executed very well. The punchline made me chuckle, which I assure you, is a very rare thing indeed. It just goes to show that real life is sometimes funnier than fiction.
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This is awesome, I love the eyes, I also love the facial expressions on the last panel, a good piece of art, (This is my first Critique) I think you did a really good job on the mane and basicly everything, I know I couldn't do anything CLOSE to this. I think the shading really adds a good effect. I personally know that Granny Smith is a hard character to make. So good job. I really think you should keep making these, I think Apple Bloom just looks so cute. I this is the first of your work I think I have seen, but I will be sure to add you to my watch and keep in touch xxxx
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:icondragonlover553:
Dragonlover553 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015
So this is based on a true story... cool.
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DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Pft, it took me awhile to find out the Toothfairy is just a scam. She just takes your teeth and promise money in return, but really, they just take your teeth so they can keep it under HER pillow and wait for the Toothfairy to give her money. And yes, my logic here makes complete sense...

~All My Best
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:icondragonlover553:
Dragonlover553 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015
Fools! I will steal you teeth and slay to tooth fairy when she appears to claim them!
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:icondrwhofan611:
DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ura!!!
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:icondragonlover553:
Dragonlover553 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015
What.
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:icondrwhofan611:
DrWhoFan611 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It's basically another 'yay' or 'yus!!!' or whatever.
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Clockblockers Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fff....Hehe.
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:iconvanna1994:
Vanna1994 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
That was funny lol
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:iconchaudstarpower:
ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
wow XD funny joke
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:iconantivenom907:
antivenom907 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

I don't totally get it


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:iconstormcutie:
StormCutie Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Writer
So she lost her tooth and she's asking if they've seen her money anywhere. She claims that she knows where the tooth is, but she lost the money that the tooth fairy gave her.
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:iconfire5236:
Fire5236 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't get it...
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:iconflitterbluehearts:
Flitterbluehearts Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
oh come on! ( i get it, When i lose  a tooth thats what i'm gonna say to rarity lol)
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:iconjoebrony:
JoeBrony Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Hahahaha! I get it :D
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:icontheoathseeker:
TheOathseeker Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Hey evil-dec0y I am a writer and I really like your work so if you ever thing of making a comics seires I'd love to write it.
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:iconevil-dec0y:
Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok, I'll keep that in mind:)
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Jesserfly Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: pfft win.
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:iconmadgearsbrony:
MadGearsBrony Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
 XDDDD, awesome.

Well, the joke is pretty clear. Applebloom lost a tooth and was expecting money from the fairy, but she didn't get any because nobody else knew she has lost a tooth. So Applejack ask her "Oh, did you lost a tooth" and she said "No, I know where the tooth went (with the fairy), I lost the money".
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
*Raven*: Um..... explanation?
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AwesomeJason Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
This is a really good comic! Good job Evil-DeC0Y! Maybe, the tooth fairy wanted the money back. xD Im giving you a watch to keep in touch with your artwork! ^.^
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Genesis890 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Hopefully they give the money back to Apple Bloom. 
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:iconevil-dec0y:
Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

They didn't take the money silly ;P.

 

Applebloom lost it.

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Genesis890 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Oh, I thought they took it to pull a prank on her. 
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:iconevil-dec0y:
Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

:iconbigmacintoshplz: :iconsaysplz: Nnnope!

 

Sadly though a lot of people have thought that that was what I had indeed intended, I guess I should've worked on the writing for this a little bit longer.

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Genesis890 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
I think there were two problems with it. The first problem was the fact that Apple Bloom's sentence wasn't vague enough. From reading it, it was clear that Apple Bloom wanted to know where her money went. The second problem is the facial expressions in the last panels. To me, at least, AJ's and Smith's expressions seem mischievous, and Apple Bloom's face looks like it's a mix of annoyance and realizing that they were behind it. 

That's what I think messed me up. 
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RGLloyd Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
Oh, I love child logic...
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Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
That's a twist! :D
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:iconpinkamenadianepielol:
oook i dont get itNaruto Dancing 
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RainbowDash-Rainboom Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student General Artist
XD oh aj
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KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Okay, for that to have happened in real life is adorable! Did your nephew know about the truth of the tooth fairy, or was he just saying how he knew the tooth fairy had it? Awesome job! Don't show this to your mom, she might get angry at you for picturing her so old...
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Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Nah, he doesn't know about the tooth fairy yet.

Thanks:D!

Hah yeah, my mom has watched MLP before, so she would understand that these are the only characters that would suit this, but otherwise she might have also wondered why I depicted my nephew and I as femalesXD!

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:iconkingarthur5:
KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
"Is there something you'd like to tell me, son?"
Haha just messsing around! Did you show it to her as a sort of "this is what I'm interested in" sort of deal?
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Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She hasn't seen this one, but she does know that I do pony art.
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KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
I meant the one episode of MLP she watched.
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Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Oh, no it wasn't like that.

My niece watches a lot of cartoons, and sometimes you can't help but to watch them as well, and MLP is one of those cartoons.

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KingArthur5 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
I see! Just curious, you know which she watched? Did it help her understand your being a brony?
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Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know which ones she saw first, but I think she's seen most of them by now.
I don't think she saw any of the episodes before she found out I was a brony, but considering I have high standards for the shows that I watch, she probably understood that it was a good show.
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1992andbeyond Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Sorry Applebloom, but the tooth fairy got arrested for illegal ivory trade. 
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:icontigreanpony:
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Lol That was good.
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:iconyarrix:
Yarrix Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WAHAHAHAHA!!! Nice One^^
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
*wa-waaa*
lol
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:icondigoraccoon:
Digoraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh heh, the things kids say :D
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:iconhappylarry:
Happylarry Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Ahehehee kids say de darndest things don't they?
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:icondigoraccoon:
Digoraccoon Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They do. My five-year old says amazing things like Bloom.
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:iconhappylarry:
Happylarry Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Ha! Intrestin....
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
That's telling like it is, Apple Bloom.
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:iconbenrg:
BenRG Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Apples learn to be canny about financial matters very early on.  I like Granny's smirk in the last panel - "Growin' up so quickly!"
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DavidCurser Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
I dont get it.
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Evil-DeC0Y Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oops sorry, I copied that from an earlier reply and I didn't mean to add my signature to it X/
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DavidCurser Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
aye
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